# Translation Review Summary

Source: 修学导航中心本地化对照_待校验260519.xlsx
Total pairs: 622
Issues found: 26 categories (84 individual occurrences)
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## Critical — Buddhist technical terms mistranslated

- 学士/修士/胜士/智士 — four identity stages: "bachelor/monk/winner/wise man"
  Should be: Beginner Practitioner / Practitioner / Excellent Practitioner / Wisdom Practitioner
- 胜解 — "ultimate solution" → "resolute conviction" (adhimokṣa)
- 行舍、不放逸 — "Walk without letting go" → "Equanimity, diligence"
- 无住心 — "no intention to live" → "non-abiding mind"
- 依唯识见 — "based on knowledge and view alone" → "based on the Consciousness-Only view"
- 依中观见 — "relying on the central vision" → "relying on the Madhyamaka view"
- 无所得心 — "heart of nothing" → "mind of non-attainment"
- 覆 — "subversion" → "concealment"
- 悭 — "thrift" → "stinginess"
- 布施 — "alms" → "generosity"
- 正念 — "righteous thoughts" → "mindfulness"
- 同事 — "colleagues" → "acting in harmony" (四摄法)
- 爱语 — "love words" → "kind speech" (四摄法)

## High — Other translation errors

- "Is we" (rows 437, 447): literal MT artifact of 是否 → "if we"
- "hard drive" (row 607): 硬盘 = "endure by force", not computer hardware
- 放逸/懈怠 both → "laziness" (rows 224, 268, 324, 378): two distinct terms conflated

## Medium — Grammar and UI

- "concentration, concentration" (7 rows): duplicate, should clarify śamatha/vipaśyanā
- "have it been" → "has it been" (row 479)
- "mental qualities becomes" → "become" (row 418)
- "Complete" mid-sentence capitalization (row 72)
- "Suspended" → "Paused" for media playback (rows 539, 543)
- 同愿同行 → "Walk with the same will": loses the 愿 (aspiration) component

## Low — Typos and formatting

- "AndroidAndroid" → "Android" (rows 386, 396)
- "IOS" → "iOS" (rows 385, 395)
- "Bodhi Navigator" vs "Bodhi Navigation": inconsistent product name (row 22)
- Missing <b> opening tag (row 389)
- Garbled sentence: "remaining space above for better playback" (row 558)
- Sentence fragment ending with bare "please" (row 535): likely CSV split artifact
