# Edit Suggestions — 75【如何建立信仰】 (How to Establish Faith)

Translator: agent (self-review mode)
Date: 2026-08-06

## Summary

Self-review complete. Three categories of fixes applied to target.dj. No remaining accuracy or fluency issues flagged.

## Applied Fixes

### 1. DoT定稿 terminology alignment

| Term | Before | After | Source |
|------|--------|-------|--------|
| 三级修学 | three-level practice system/model/program | Three-Stage Practice | DoT定稿 |
| 同喜班 | Joyful Fellowship class | Collective Joy Course | DoT定稿 |
| 同修班 | Cultivation Fellowship class | Collective Practice Course | DoT定稿 |
| 同德班 | Virtue Fellowship class | Collective Virtue Course | DoT定稿 |
| 人生佛教 | Buddhism for daily life | Buddhism for Human Life | 佛教术语 |

All occurrences globally replaced; verified no orphan patterns remain.

### 2. Terminology decisions carried forward from first draft (no fix needed)

| Chinese | English rendering | Rationale |
|---------|------------------|-----------|
| 皈依体 | refuge essence | Not in terms DB; coined consistently |
| 三级修学 → Three-Stage Practice | Kept lower-case "practice" in running text | Follows DoT定稿 casing |
| 自性三宝 | intrinsic Three Jewels | Standard Buddhist idiom |
| 集资净障 | accumulate merit and purify obstacles | Standard; avoids "gather provisions" which is too literal |
| 现行熏种子 | current actions perfume seeds | Yogācāra standard |

### 3. Style/voice notes (no fix needed)

- Speaker's 语气 preserved: first-person "I often say" patterns, rhetorical questions, reasoning connectives (so it is clear, thus, in sum)
- TOC: plain bullet list, anchors as plain placeholders `{#}` per convention
- Single `*` for Djot emphasis, no `**`
- Line count verified: 445 source = 445 target

## Open Considerations

None. Translation ready for peer review or typesetting.