- title: 英文部分起始位置异常
  location: PDF 第 96 页 / 全书结构
  original: PDF 第 96 页仍为中文正文（内页码 92），英文标题页实际从 PDF 第 101 页开始，中间 PDF 第 100 页为空白页（仅含
    InDesign 导出页脚）。
  suggestion: 确认是否应删除 PDF 第 100 页空白页，使英文部分从 PDF 第 96 页开始；或更新封面/前言说明。
  type: formatting
  priority: Critical
  notes: 与计划预期“英文从 PDF 页 96 开始”不符，需排版确认。
- title: InDesign 导出页脚未清除
  location: 全书每一页底部
  original: 每页底部保留 “3-43佛教徒的人生态度-改字号.indd N 2026/7/11 …” 或 “佛教徒的人生态度-改版面 二校 0628.indd
    N 2026/7/8 …” 等 InDesign 导出信息。
  suggestion: 删除所有页面底部的 InDesign 文件名与导出时间戳页脚，保留正式页码（如有）或留空。
  type: formatting
  priority: Critical
  notes: 影响成书质量。
- title: 英文第四章标题与英文引言不一致
  location: PDF 第 103 页（英文目录）/ 第 165 页（正文标题）/ 第 105 页（引言）
  original: IV Focus on Life or on Death（目录与正文）；引言中为 “Cherish life or face death?”
  suggestion: 统一为 **Cherish Life or Face Death**，以与英文引言及中文“重生还是重死”对应。
  type: bilingual
  priority: Major
  notes: ''
- title: 缺少系动词 is
  location: PDF 第 122 页（内页码 118），Section III, chapter 3, paragraph 2
  original: Good deeds, no matter how great or small, should be done whenever possible—according
    to one’s ability, strength, and circumstances. This spirit exemplified by Avalokitesvara
    Bodhisattva, who “responds to every prayer and serves as a guiding vessel in the
    sea of suffering.”
  suggestion: This spirit **is** exemplified by Avalokitesvara Bodhisattva...
  type: grammar
  priority: Major
  notes: ''
- title: 代词错误 their → our
  location: PDF 第 155 页（内页码 151），Section III, chapter 2, paragraph 3
  original: The more we acquire, the stronger **their** fear of losing it becomes.
  suggestion: The more we acquire, the stronger **our** fear of losing it becomes.
  type: grammar
  priority: Major
  notes: Pronoun shift; subject has been “we.”
- title: 逗号粘连/流水句
  location: PDF 第 162 页（内页码 158），Section III, chapter 2, paragraph 3
  original: Similarly, our demands for better housing have grown rapidly, even in
    developing economies such as China, real estate development remains unchecked.
  suggestion: Similarly, our demands for better housing have grown rapidly. **Even
    in** developing economies such as China, real estate development remains unchecked.（或插入
    “and”）
  type: grammar
  priority: Major
  notes: Run-on / comma splice; second clause is not subordinate.
- title: 涅槃术语不标准
  location: PDF 第 170 页（内页码 166），Section IV, chapter 1, paragraph 2
  original: nirvana has two aspects—‘complete nirvana’ and ‘incomplete nirvana.’
  suggestion: nirvana has two aspects—**nirvana with remainder** and **nirvana without
    remainder**.（或 “non-final nirvana” / “final nirvana”）
  type: terminology
  priority: Major
  notes: 有余涅槃 / 无余涅槃的标准英译。
- title: 拼写错误 absorded → absorbed
  location: PDF 第 173 页（内页码 169），Section IV, chapter 2, subsection 1
  original: the heavenly beings are only **absorded** in pleasures
  suggestion: the heavenly beings are only **absorbed** in pleasures
  type: content/spelling
  priority: Major
  notes: ''
- title: 人生佛教译法应为 Buddhism for Human Life
  location: PDF 第 177 页（内页码 173）/ 第 178 页（内页码 174），Section IV, chapter 3
  original: Master Taixu (1890–1947) advocated “Buddhism of Human Life,” ... / “Buddhism
    of Human Life aims to interpret …”
  suggestion: Master Taixu advocated “**Buddhism for Human Life**,” … / “Buddhism
    for Human Life aims to interpret …”
  type: terminology
  priority: Major
  notes: MPI 术语规范：人生佛教 = Buddhism for Human Life；勿与人间佛教 Humanistic Buddhism 混淆。
- title: 介词搭配错误 about → for
  location: PDF 第 189 页（内页码 185），Section V, introduction
  original: show no care **about** the suffering of the world
  suggestion: show no care **for** the suffering of the world
  type: grammar
  priority: Major
  notes: Care for 为标准搭配。
- title: 术语不标准 self-deliverers → self-liberators
  location: PDF 第 198 页（内页码 194），Section V, chapter 3, subsection 2
  original: This is why they are sometimes called ‘**self-deliverers**,’ as if they
    care only about their own liberation and ignore the world’s suffering.
  suggestion: This is why they are sometimes called ‘**self-liberators**’ (or ‘those
    who seek their own liberation’), …
  type: terminology
  priority: Major
  notes: 自了汉 / 自度者的标准英译。
- title: 主谓一致（attitudes 复数）
  location: PDF 第 209 页（内页码 205），Section VI, chapter 1, paragraph 1
  original: Our attitudes toward the world **is** commonly known as our worldview.
  suggestion: Our **attitude** toward the world **is** commonly known as our worldview.（与中文“对世界的态度”单数一致）
  type: grammar
  priority: Major
  notes: 中文为单数，英文用 attitudes 复数与 is 不一致。
- title: Avalokitesvara vs Avalokiteshvara 拼写不一致
  location: PDF 第 216 页（内页码 212）
  original: 同页出现 “Avalokitesvara” 与 “Avalokiteshvara” 两种拼写。
  suggestion: 统一拼写；推荐按 MPI 术语规范改为 **Guanyin Bodhisattva**（中文为“观音菩萨”），或至少统一为 Avalokitesvara。
  type: terminology
  priority: Major
  notes: 同一页两种拼写。
- title: 术语 awkward：无缘大慈、同体大悲
  location: PDF 第 218 页（内页码 214），Section VI, chapter 3, paragraph 2
  original: Another expression of great loving-kindness and great compassion is ‘unconditional
    great loving-kindness and compassion of shared unity.’
  suggestion: Another expression of great loving-kindness and great compassion is
    ‘unconditional great compassion and the great sympathy of seeing others as oneself.’
  type: terminology
  priority: Major
  notes: 中文 无缘大慈、同体大悲 的标准英译。
- title: 关联词不完整 not only … and … → not only … but also …
  location: PDF 第 229 页（内页码 225），Section VII, chapter 3, subsection 1
  original: Monastics should cultivate pure and untainted emotions **not only** toward
    the Three Jewels, their teachers, and fellow practitioners, **and should also**
    develop compassion for all sentient beings.
  suggestion: Monastics should cultivate pure and untainted emotions **not only**
    toward the Three Jewels, their teachers, and fellow practitioners, **but also**
    develop compassion for all sentient beings.
  type: grammar
  priority: Major
  notes: ''
- title: 语法错误 in reversed → reversed / in reverse
  location: PDF 第 237 页（内页码 233），Section VIII, chapter 2, subsection 1
  original: I often write the phrase ‘adapt to conditions, embody no-self,’ or sometimes
    **in reversed**, ‘embody no-self, adapt to conditions.’
  suggestion: …or sometimes **reversed**, ‘embody no-self, adapt to conditions.’（或
    “in reverse”）
  type: grammar
  priority: Major
  notes: ''
- title: 中文第七章标题与引言不一致，影响英文对应
  location: PDF 第 5 页（中文引言）/ 第 81 页（中文正文标题）/ 第 221 页（英文标题）
  original: 中文引言“无情还是大爱”；中文正文标题“七、无情还是多情”；英文 VII To Love or Not to Love（对应引言）
  suggestion: 二选一：将中文正文标题与引言统一为“无情还是大爱”（推荐，与英文一致）；或将英文标题改为对应“无情还是多情”的译法。
  type: bilingual
  priority: Major
  notes: 需编辑定夺。
- title: 英文标题页元素待确认（布局选择）
  location: PDF 第 101 页（英文标题页）
  original: 英文标题页缺少丛书名、双语标识、出版社；作者仅列 “Master Jiqun” 未加 by。
  suggestion: 如要求与中文封面镜像，添加 The Mindful Peace Academy Collection、Chinese-English Edition、出版社英文名及
    by；如为 intentional 设计则保持。
  type: formatting/bilingual
  priority: Minor
  notes: 待排版确认。
- title: 英文目录罗马数字后缺句点
  location: PDF 第 103 页（内页码 99），Table of contents
  original: I Passive or Proactive, II Pessimism or Optimism, III Abstinence or Indulgence,
    IV Focus on Life or on Death, V Benefit Oneself or Benefit Others …
  suggestion: I. Passive or Proactive, II. Pessimism or Optimism, III. Abstinence
    or Indulgence, IV. Focus on Life or on Death, V. Benefit Oneself or Benefit Others
    …
  type: formatting
  priority: Minor
  notes: 罗马数字在标题中通常加句点。
- title: 首字下沉 L iving 空格异常
  location: PDF 第 105 页（内页码 101），Body opening paragraph
  original: L      iving in this world, we have our own views on life …
  suggestion: Living in this world, we have our own views on life …
  type: formatting
  priority: Minor
  notes: 首字下沉后多余空格导致单词分裂。
- title: 缺少所有格/冠词 keep distance
  location: PDF 第 106 页（内页码 102），Section I, introduction
  original: Due to these misconceptions, many people **keep distance** from Buddhism,
    fearing that embracing the faith would strip away life’s pleasures or make them
    seem different from others.
  suggestion: many people **keep a distance** from Buddhism（或 keep their distance
    from Buddhism）
  type: grammar
  priority: Minor
  notes: ''
- title: 分号后大写 + benefit 单复数
  location: PDF 第 111 页（内页码 107），Section I, chapter 2, paragraph 2
  original: When we are frustrated, it is best to turn inward to cultivate character
    and improve ourselves; **When** we attain success and high position, we should
    step forward to assist virtuous rulers and work for the **benefits** of all.
  suggestion: '...improve ourselves; **when** we attain success and high position,
    ... work for the **benefit** of all.'
  type: grammar/punctuation
  priority: Minor
  notes: ''
- title: 中文数字与量词之间空格
  location: PDF 第 13 页 / 第 41 页 / 第 42 页
  original: 66 岁、80 岁、50 岁、12 倍
  suggestion: 66岁、80岁、50岁、12倍
  type: formatting
  priority: Minor
  notes: 中文排版数字与量词通常连写；如全书统一空格设计则保持。
- title: 英文第四章 4.2 小标题多冠词 the
  location: PDF 第 173 页（内页码 169），Section IV, chapter 2, subsection 1
  original: 2. Buddhism Focuses on **the** Real Life
  suggestion: 2. Buddhism Focuses on Real Life（或 This Real Life）
  type: bilingual/grammar
  priority: Minor
  notes: ''
- title: Sutra → Sutta 术语规范
  location: PDF 第 180 页（内页码 176），Section IV, chapter 2, subsection 5
  original: the **Sigalovada Sutra** and the Sutra on the Ten Wholesome Ways of Action
  suggestion: the **Sigalovada Sutta** and the Sutra on the Ten Wholesome Ways of
    Action
  type: terminology
  priority: Minor
  notes: Pali 经典通称 Sigālovāda Sutta。
- title: 缺少定冠词/名词 people：Ancient Chinese
  location: PDF 第 193 页（内页码 189），Section V, chapter 3, subsection 2
  original: '**Ancient Chinese** valued honest business—offering genuine goods at
    fair prices and deceiving neither the old nor the young—for only in this way could
    one win the trust of others.'
  suggestion: '**The ancient Chinese** valued honest business...（或 Ancient Chinese
    people valued...）'
  type: grammar
  priority: Minor
  notes: ''
- title: The Lamrim 用法 awkward
  location: PDF 第 202 页（内页码 198），Section V, chapter 3, subsection 2
  original: '**The Lamrim** teaches that …'
  suggestion: '**Lamrim** teaches that … 或 **The Lamrim teachings** teach that …'
  type: terminology/formatting
  priority: Minor
  notes: ''
- title: 多余逗号 even more so, wisdom → even more so wisdom
  location: PDF 第 203 页（内页码 199），Section V, chapter 3, subsection 2
  original: we need compassion, but **even more so, wisdom**.
  suggestion: we need compassion, but **even more so wisdom**.
  type: grammar/punctuation
  priority: Minor
  notes: ''
- title: Take the parent-child relationship for example 语序 awkward
  location: PDF 第 205 页（内页码 201），Section V, chapter 3, subsection 4
  original: Take the parent-child relationship **for example**.
  suggestion: '**Take, for example, the parent-child relationship.**'
  type: grammar
  priority: Minor
  notes: for example 后置不够地道，前置更顺。
- title: Bodhicitta 大小写不一致
  location: PDF 第 216 页（内页码 212），Section VI, chapter 3, paragraph 1
  original: cultivate not just the mind of renunciation but also **Bodhicitta**
  suggestion: cultivate not just the mind of renunciation but also **bodhicitta**
  type: formatting
  priority: Minor
  notes: 文中其余处均小写。
- title: 缺少定冠词/名词 people：Ancient Chinese
  location: PDF 第 222 页（内页码 218），Section VII, chapter 1, paragraph 1
  original: '**Ancient Chinese** valued “cognition,” “emotion,” and “intention.”'
  suggestion: '**The ancient Chinese** valued “cognition,” “emotion,” and “intention.”（或
    Ancient Chinese people valued...）'
  type: grammar
  priority: Minor
  notes: ''
- title: 逗号粘连：It is active, not passive, definite, not ambiguous
  location: PDF 第 238 页（内页码 234），Section VIII, chapter 2, subsection 1
  original: It is active, not passive, definite, not ambiguous.
  suggestion: It is active, not passive**;** definite, not ambiguous.（或 It is active
    rather than passive, definite rather than ambiguous.）
  type: grammar/punctuation
  priority: Minor
  notes: ''
- title: 同一引文出现两个版本
  location: PDF 第 24 页（第 2 章）与 PDF 第 78 页（第 6 章）
  original: p.24 “出家乃大丈夫事，非将相所能为。”；p.78 “出家乃大丈夫之事，非将相之所能为也。”
  suggestion: 统一为通行版本，例如“出家乃大丈夫之事，非将相之所能为也。”
  type: terminology/content
  priority: Minor
  notes: 待确认。
- title: 中文目录“目 录”中间空格
  location: PDF 第 3 页（中文目录页）
  original: 【目 录】
  suggestion: 【目录】
  type: formatting
  priority: Minor
  notes: 请确认是否为排版字距；非设计规范应去掉。
- title: 中文正文分项编号使用半角括号
  location: PDF 第 7 页、第 13 页等（各章小节内分项）
  original: (1) 消极和积极的表现；(2) 消极和积极的产生背景 …
  suggestion: （1）消极和积极的表现；（2）消极和积极的产生背景 …
  type: formatting
  priority: Minor
  notes: 中文标点应使用全角括号，请统一全书。
- title: 封面/内页页眉、裁切标记
  location: 全书
  original: 页面四角保留印刷裁切标记与对位标记；页眉为“佛教徒的人生态度”或“The Life Attitudes of Buddhists”。
  suggestion: 确认裁切标记是否保留（用于印刷则保留，用于电子阅读则删除）；统一页眉字体/位置。
  type: formatting
  priority: Minor
  notes: 待排版确认。