# 1 original: 学士 / 修士 / 胜士 / 智士 translated: bachelor / monk / winner (Victory) / wise man These four identity-stage terms appear in multiple rows (11, 43, 473–476). They are consistently mistranslated: 学士 = "Beginner Practitioner" (not academic "bachelor") 修士 = "Practitioner" / "Adept" (not monastic "monk") 胜士 = "Excellent Practitioner" / "Superior Practitioner" (not competition "winner" or "Victory") 智士 = "Wisdom Practitioner" / "Sage" (not just "wise man") These are stages in a Buddhist study path, not academic degrees, monastic status, or competition results. Change globally. # 2 original: 胜解 translated: ultimate solution (rows 156, 213, 257, 289, 344) 胜解 = "resolute conviction" / "determined understanding" (adhimokṣa). Not "solution" — this is a mental factor, not a fix. Suggested: "Resolute conviction" # 3 original: 行舍、不放逸 translated: Walk without letting go (rows 214, 258, 290) 行舍 = equanimity / mental balance (upekṣā). 不放逸 = diligence / conscientiousness (apramāda). "Walk without letting go" is a nonsensical literal translation. Suggested: "Equanimity, diligence" # 4 original: 无住心 translated: no intention to live (row 356) 无住心 = "non-abiding mind" (aprāptiṣṭhita-citta). "No intention to live" means something entirely different and alarming. Suggested: "non-abiding mind" # 5 original: 依唯识见 translated: based on knowledge and view alone (row 62) 唯识 = Consciousness-Only / Yogācāra, a major Mahayana philosophical school. "Knowledge and view alone" is a misreading of the characters 唯 (only) + 识 (consciousness/knowledge). Suggested: "based on the Consciousness-Only view" # 6 original: 依中观见 translated: relying on the central vision (row 66) 中观 = Madhyamaka / Middle Way, another major Mahayana school. "Central vision" misreads 中观 as 中(central) + 观(view). Suggested: "relying on the Madhyamaka view" # 7 original: 无所得心 translated: heart of nothing (rows 66, 71) 无所得心 = "mind of non-attainment" / "mind of non-acquisition" (anupalabdha-citta). "Heart of nothing" is too literal and sounds nihilistic. Suggested: "mind of non-attainment" # 8 original: 覆 / 悭 (in lists of 烦恼/mental afflictions) translated: subversion / thrift (rows 143, 182, 226, 270, 326, 380) 覆 = "concealment" (hiding one's faults, mrakṣa). Not political "subversion." 悭 = "stinginess / miserliness" (mātsarya). "Thrift" is a virtue in English — 悭 is a vice. Suggested: "concealment" and "stinginess" respectively. Change globally. # 9 original: 同事 / 爱语 (四摄法 — Four All-embracing Virtues) translated: colleagues / love words (rows 123, 169, 200, 244, 313, 367) 同事 in 四摄法 = "acting in harmony with others" (samānārthatā), not workplace "colleagues." 爱语 in 四摄法 = "kind speech / affectionate speech" (priyavāditā), not romantic "love words." Suggested: "kind speech" and "acting in harmony" respectively. Change globally. # 10 original: 布施 translated: Give alms / Alms (rows 95, 129, 175, 206, 250, 319, 373) 布施 = "generosity / giving" (dāna). "Alms" has narrow mendicant/monastic connotations in English. "Generosity" is the standard Buddhist translation. Suggested: "Generosity" (noun) / "Giving" (verb). Change globally. # 11 original: 正念 translated: righteous thoughts (rows 382, 596) 正念 = "mindfulness" (sati / smṛti), one of the most standardized Buddhist translation terms. "Righteous thoughts" is wrong — it's a fundamental term and must be "mindfulness." Suggested: "mindfulness" everywhere. # 12 original: 放逸、懈怠 translated: laziness, laziness (rows 224, 268, 324, 378) Two distinct mental factors both rendered as "laziness": 放逸 (pramāda) = "carelessness / self-indulgence / heedlessness" 懈怠 (kausīdya) = "laziness / sloth" Suggested: "carelessness, laziness" # 13 original: 定(止)、慧(观) translated: concentration, concentration (concentration), wisdom (contemplation) (rows 102, 136, 161, 219, 263, 295, 349) 定(止)= concentration (śamatha). Currently "concentration" appears twice — the parenthetical should clarify. Suggested: "concentration (śamatha), wisdom (vipaśyanā)" # 14 original: 我们在做正念禅修的过程中,需要检查自己这十二元素都具备了没有。 translated: ...we need to check Is we have all these twelve elements... (rows 437, 447) "Is we" — reads as a literal machine translation of 是否. Should be "if we" or "whether we." Also: "...If we have it..." → the pronoun should be "them" (the twelve/ten elements). Suggested: "...we need to check whether we have all these twelve elements. If we have them..." # 15 original: 您开始比较规律地练习正念有多少年? translated: How many years have it been since... (row 479) Subject-verb agreement: "has it been." Suggested: "How many years has it been since you started practicing mindfulness on a more regular basis?" # 16 original: 通过不断重复,使相关心理成为常态; translated: ...the relevant mental qualities becomes the norm; (row 418) Subject-verb agreement: "qualities" (plural) needs "become." Suggested: "...the relevant mental qualities become the norm;" # 17 original: 建立、培养、训练高级利他心理...训练、熟悉、提升、圆满初级和中级利他心理。 translated: ...we train, familiarize, improve, and Complete primary and intermediate altruistic mental qualities. (row 72) "Complete" is randomly capitalized mid-sentence. Suggested: "...and complete primary and intermediate altruistic mental qualities." # 18 original: 已暂停 (media player status) translated: Suspended (rows 539, 543) "Suspended" is unusual for media playback UI. Standard English is "Paused." Suggested: "Paused" # 19 original: Android安卓下载 translated: AndroidAndroid download (rows 386, 396) Duplicated word. "Android" already encodes the platform. Suggested: "Android download" # 20 original: iOS苹果下载 translated: IOS Apple download (rows 385, 395) "IOS" should be "iOS" (Apple's official capitalization). Suggested: "iOS Apple download" # 21 original: 菩提导航APP translated: Bodhi Navigator App (row 22) Elsewhere called "Bodhi Navigation App." The product name should be consistent. Suggested: "Bodhi Navigation App" everywhere. # 22 original: 同愿同行 共同成长 translated: Walk with the same will and grow together (row 388) 同愿同行 = "sharing the same aspiration, walking together." "Walk with the same will" is awkward and misses the 愿 (vow/aspiration) component. Suggested: "Sharing the same aspiration, walking together www.pa.world" # 23 original: 进入服务大众全球共享平台... translated: Enter (A Global Platform for the Public)... (row 389) The opening tag is missing; only a stray appears. Suggested: "Enter Service to the Public Global Sharing Platform (A Global Platform for the Public)..." # 24 original: 靠毅力硬盘,压石头、压大米 translated: Rely on perseverance to hard drive, crush stones and rice (row 607) 硬盘 here means "stubbornly / forcefully endure" (硬=hard, 盘=persist/endure — colloquial usage). Not "hard drive" (the computer component). Suggested: "Rely on perseverance and grit, [train by] pressing stones and rice" # 25 original: 以上的剩余空间以获得更好的播放效果。 translated: The remaining space above for better playback effect. (row 558) Garbled translation — reads as a fragment. Likely means: "Clear sufficient space [on device] for better playback." Suggested: "Ensure enough free space for better playback." # 26 original: 您当前的浏览器,不支持视频播放,请 translated: Your current browser does not support video playback, please (row 535) Sentence fragment ending with "please". The Chinese original likely continues with "请下载并使用chrome浏览器" from the next row — the rows got split. Check if this is a CSV-split issue or if "请" is a standalone UI element that should be a button label.