- Active voice and 'we' subjects (R1)
- Noun-to-verb conversion and abstract-to-concrete rewrites (R2/R8)
- Simplified vocabulary and removed filler words (R3/R5)
- Split long sentences and improved conversational tone (R4/R6)
- Removed unnecessary -ly adverbs and stiff constructions (R7)
- Specific word fixes: tumor hospitals -> cancer hospitals, stop the loss -> keep pain from getting worse, etc.
- Restored A:/_A:_ formatting so only first answer paragraph carries the marker.
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