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# 1
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original: 学士 / 修士 / 胜士 / 智士
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translated: bachelor / monk / winner (Victory) / wise man
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These four identity-stage terms appear in multiple rows (11, 43, 473–476). They are consistently mistranslated:
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学士 = "Beginner Practitioner" (not academic "bachelor")
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修士 = "Practitioner" / "Adept" (not monastic "monk")
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胜士 = "Excellent Practitioner" / "Superior Practitioner" (not competition "winner" or "Victory")
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智士 = "Wisdom Practitioner" / "Sage" (not just "wise man")
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These are stages in a Buddhist study path, not academic degrees, monastic status, or competition results. Change globally.
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# 2
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original: 胜解
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translated: ultimate solution (rows 156, 213, 257, 289, 344)
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胜解 = "resolute conviction" / "determined understanding" (adhimokṣa). Not "solution" — this is a mental factor, not a fix.
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Suggested: "Resolute conviction"
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# 3
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original: 行舍、不放逸
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translated: Walk without letting go (rows 214, 258, 290)
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行舍 = equanimity / mental balance (upekṣā). 不放逸 = diligence / conscientiousness (apramāda).
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"Walk without letting go" is a nonsensical literal translation.
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Suggested: "Equanimity, diligence"
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# 4
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original: 无住心
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translated: no intention to live (row 356)
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无住心 = "non-abiding mind" (aprāptiṣṭhita-citta). "No intention to live" means something entirely different and alarming.
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Suggested: "non-abiding mind"
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# 5
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original: 依唯识见
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translated: based on knowledge and view alone (row 62)
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唯识 = Consciousness-Only / Yogācāra, a major Mahayana philosophical school.
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"Knowledge and view alone" is a misreading of the characters 唯 (only) + 识 (consciousness/knowledge).
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Suggested: "based on the Consciousness-Only view"
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# 6
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original: 依中观见
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translated: relying on the central vision (row 66)
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中观 = Madhyamaka / Middle Way, another major Mahayana school.
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"Central vision" misreads 中观 as 中(central) + 观(view).
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Suggested: "relying on the Madhyamaka view"
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# 7
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original: 无所得心
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translated: heart of nothing (rows 66, 71)
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无所得心 = "mind of non-attainment" / "mind of non-acquisition" (anupalabdha-citta).
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"Heart of nothing" is too literal and sounds nihilistic.
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Suggested: "mind of non-attainment"
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# 8
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original: 覆 / 悭 (in lists of 烦恼/mental afflictions)
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translated: subversion / thrift (rows 143, 182, 226, 270, 326, 380)
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覆 = "concealment" (hiding one's faults, mrakṣa). Not political "subversion."
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悭 = "stinginess / miserliness" (mātsarya). "Thrift" is a virtue in English — 悭 is a vice.
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Suggested: "concealment" and "stinginess" respectively. Change globally.
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# 9
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original: 同事 / 爱语 (四摄法 — Four All-embracing Virtues)
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translated: colleagues / love words (rows 123, 169, 200, 244, 313, 367)
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同事 in 四摄法 = "acting in harmony with others" (samānārthatā), not workplace "colleagues."
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爱语 in 四摄法 = "kind speech / affectionate speech" (priyavāditā), not romantic "love words."
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Suggested: "kind speech" and "acting in harmony" respectively. Change globally.
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# 10
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original: 布施
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translated: Give alms / Alms (rows 95, 129, 175, 206, 250, 319, 373)
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布施 = "generosity / giving" (dāna). "Alms" has narrow mendicant/monastic connotations in English. "Generosity" is the standard Buddhist translation.
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Suggested: "Generosity" (noun) / "Giving" (verb). Change globally.
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# 11
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original: 正念
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translated: righteous thoughts (rows 382, 596)
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正念 = "mindfulness" (sati / smṛti), one of the most standardized Buddhist translation terms.
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"Righteous thoughts" is wrong — it's a fundamental term and must be "mindfulness."
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Suggested: "mindfulness" everywhere.
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# 12
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original: 放逸、懈怠
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translated: laziness, laziness (rows 224, 268, 324, 378)
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Two distinct mental factors both rendered as "laziness":
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放逸 (pramāda) = "carelessness / self-indulgence / heedlessness"
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懈怠 (kausīdya) = "laziness / sloth"
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Suggested: "carelessness, laziness"
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# 13
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original: 定（止）、慧（观）
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translated: concentration, concentration (concentration), wisdom (contemplation) (rows 102, 136, 161, 219, 263, 295, 349)
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定（止）= concentration (śamatha). Currently "concentration" appears twice — the parenthetical should clarify.
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Suggested: "concentration (śamatha), wisdom (vipaśyanā)"
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# 14
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original: 我们在做正念禅修的过程中，需要检查自己这十二元素都具备了没有。
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translated: ...we need to check Is we have all these twelve elements... (rows 437, 447)
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"Is we" — reads as a literal machine translation of 是否. Should be "if we" or "whether we."
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Also: "...If we have it..." → the pronoun should be "them" (the twelve/ten elements).
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Suggested: "...we need to check whether we have all these twelve elements. If we have them..."
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# 15
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original: 您开始比较规律地练习正念有多少年？
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translated: How many years have it been since... (row 479)
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Subject-verb agreement: "has it been."
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Suggested: "How many years has it been since you started practicing mindfulness on a more regular basis?"
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# 16
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original: 通过不断重复，使相关心理成为常态；
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translated: ...the relevant mental qualities becomes the norm; (row 418)
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Subject-verb agreement: "qualities" (plural) needs "become."
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Suggested: "...the relevant mental qualities become the norm;"
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# 17
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original: 建立、培养、训练高级利他心理...训练、熟悉、提升、圆满初级和中级利他心理。
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translated: ...we train, familiarize, improve, and Complete primary and intermediate altruistic mental qualities. (row 72)
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"Complete" is randomly capitalized mid-sentence.
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Suggested: "...and complete primary and intermediate altruistic mental qualities."
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# 18
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original: 已暂停 (media player status)
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translated: Suspended (rows 539, 543)
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"Suspended" is unusual for media playback UI. Standard English is "Paused."
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Suggested: "Paused"
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# 19
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original: Android安卓下载
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translated: AndroidAndroid download (rows 386, 396)
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Duplicated word. "Android" already encodes the platform.
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Suggested: "Android download"
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# 20
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original: iOS苹果下载
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translated: IOS Apple download (rows 385, 395)
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"IOS" should be "iOS" (Apple's official capitalization).
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Suggested: "iOS Apple download"
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# 21
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original: 菩提导航APP
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translated: Bodhi Navigator App (row 22)
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Elsewhere called "Bodhi Navigation App." The product name should be consistent.
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Suggested: "Bodhi Navigation App" everywhere.
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# 22
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original: 同愿同行 共同成长
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translated: Walk with the same will and grow together (row 388)
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同愿同行 = "sharing the same aspiration, walking together."
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"Walk with the same will" is awkward and misses the 愿 (vow/aspiration) component.
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Suggested: "Sharing the same aspiration, walking together www.pa.world"
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# 23
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original: 进入<b>服务大众全球共享平台</b>...
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translated: Enter </b> (A Global Platform for the Public)... (row 389)
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The opening <b> tag is missing; only a stray </b> appears.
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Suggested: "Enter <b>Service to the Public Global Sharing Platform</b> (A Global Platform for the Public)..."
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# 24
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original: 靠毅力硬盘，压石头、压大米
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translated: Rely on perseverance to hard drive, crush stones and rice (row 607)
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硬盘 here means "stubbornly / forcefully endure" (硬=hard, 盘=persist/endure — colloquial usage).
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Not "hard drive" (the computer component).
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Suggested: "Rely on perseverance and grit, [train by] pressing stones and rice"
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# 25
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original: 以上的剩余空间以获得更好的播放效果。
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translated: The remaining space above for better playback effect. (row 558)
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Garbled translation — reads as a fragment. Likely means: "Clear sufficient space [on device] for better playback."
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Suggested: "Ensure enough free space for better playback."
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# 26
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original: 您当前的浏览器，不支持视频播放，请
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translated: Your current browser does not support video playback, please (row 535)
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Sentence fragment ending with "please". The Chinese original likely continues with "请下载并使用chrome浏览器" from the next row — the rows got split.
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Check if this is a CSV-split issue or if "请" is a standalone UI element that should be a button label.
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