REVIEW EDITS (2026-06-30): Applied self-review findings from review-comments.dj.

Recurring patterns smoothed across the text include:
- "keen on" -> "eagerly pursuing" / "eager to"
- "great wise teachers" -> "great teachers"
- "wisdom culture" -> "culture of wisdom"
- "more ultimate" -> "more complete" / "more profound"
- "delusive thoughts still fly about" -> "delusions run wild"
- "outdo animals by far" -> "animals are left far behind"
- "arouse resonance" -> "strike a chord"
- "serve as reference" -> "provide guidance"
- "straddling two boats" -> "trying to walk two paths"
- "choice difficulty" -> "decision paralysis"
- "religious community" -> "Buddhist community"
- "tree wishing stillness while the wind keeps blowing" -> "the tree may crave stillness, but the wind will not cease"
- "optimization of life" -> "flourishing of life"
- "right-livelihood occupation" -> "right livelihood"
- "more valuably" -> "more wisely"

See review-comments.dj for the full list of findings and justifications.

translate-files/lib/mpi-bilingual-template.typ

@@ -59,7 +59,16 @@
           h.body
         } else {
           let page-num = counter(page).at(h.location()).first()
-          h.body + box(width: 1fr, repeat[.]) + str(page-num)
+          let page-spacing = 2em
+          box(
+            baseline: 100% - 0.65em,
+            box(width: 100% - page-spacing)[
+              #set par(justify: false, leading: 0.9em, spacing: 0.9em)
+              #h.body
+              #box(width: 1fr, inset: (left: 0.2em), repeat[.])
+            ]
+            + box(width: page-spacing, align(end, str(page-num)))
+          )
         }
       }
     )