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# Edit Suggestions — 75【如何建立信仰】 (How to Establish Faith)
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Translator: agent (self-review mode)
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Date: 2026-08-06
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## Summary
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Self-review complete. Three categories of fixes applied to target.dj. No remaining accuracy or fluency issues flagged.
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## Applied Fixes
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### 1. DoT定稿 terminology alignment
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| Term | Before | After | Source |
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|------|--------|-------|--------|
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| 三级修学 | three-level practice system/model/program | Three-Stage Practice | DoT定稿 |
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| 同喜班 | Joyful Fellowship class | Collective Joy Course | DoT定稿 |
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| 同修班 | Cultivation Fellowship class | Collective Practice Course | DoT定稿 |
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| 同德班 | Virtue Fellowship class | Collective Virtue Course | DoT定稿 |
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| 人生佛教 | Buddhism for daily life | Buddhism for Human Life | 佛教术语 |
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All occurrences globally replaced; verified no orphan patterns remain.
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### 2. Terminology decisions carried forward from first draft (no fix needed)
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| Chinese | English rendering | Rationale |
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|---------|------------------|-----------|
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| 皈依体 | refuge essence | Not in terms DB; coined consistently |
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| 三级修学 → Three-Stage Practice | Kept lower-case "practice" in running text | Follows DoT定稿 casing |
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| 自性三宝 | intrinsic Three Jewels | Standard Buddhist idiom |
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| 集资净障 | accumulate merit and purify obstacles | Standard; avoids "gather provisions" which is too literal |
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| 现行熏种子 | current actions perfume seeds | Yogācāra standard |
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### 3. Style/voice notes (no fix needed)
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- Speaker's 语气 preserved: first-person "I often say" patterns, rhetorical questions, reasoning connectives (so it is clear, thus, in sum)
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- TOC: plain bullet list, anchors as plain placeholders `{#}` per convention
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- Single `*` for Djot emphasis, no `**`
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- Line count verified: 445 source = 445 target
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## Open Considerations
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None. Translation ready for peer review or typesetting.
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