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Recurring patterns smoothed across the text include: - "keen on" -> "eagerly pursuing" / "eager to" - "great wise teachers" -> "great teachers" - "wisdom culture" -> "culture of wisdom" - "more ultimate" -> "more complete" / "more profound" - "delusive thoughts still fly about" -> "delusions run wild" - "outdo animals by far" -> "animals are left far behind" - "arouse resonance" -> "strike a chord" - "serve as reference" -> "provide guidance" - "straddling two boats" -> "trying to walk two paths" - "choice difficulty" -> "decision paralysis" - "religious community" -> "Buddhist community" - "tree wishing stillness while the wind keeps blowing" -> "the tree may crave stillness, but the wind will not cease" - "optimization of life" -> "flourishing of life" - "right-livelihood occupation" -> "right livelihood" - "more valuably" -> "more wisely" See review-comments.dj for the full list of findings and justifications.
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