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DOCX (0605-英文定稿) vs PDF (0624-二排-一校-0623) — discrepancies
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Source of truth: DOCX manuscript. PDF is the typeset output.
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1. Extra words in PDF
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DOCX: "The noble man is always at ease."
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PDF: "The noble man is always broad-minded and at ease."
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→ PDF adds "broad-minded and" not present in DOCX.
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2. Nine stages of śamatha — completely different translations
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Stage DOCX PDF
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1 placement of the mind placement of the mind
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2 continuous attention continuous placement
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3 repeated attention repeated placement
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4 close attention close placement
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5 tamed attention taming the mind
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6 pacified attention pacifying the mind
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7 fully pacified attention fully pacifying the mind
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8 single-pointed mind single-pointing
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9 balanced mind balanced placement
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→ DOCX uses noun phrases with "attention" / "mind".
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PDF uses gerunds with "placement" / "the mind" / "-ing".
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3. self‑reflection → self-assessment
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DOCX: "standardized self‑reflection guides"
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"self‑reflection checklist"
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PDF: "standardized selfassessment guides"
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"self-assessment checklist"
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→ DOCX uses "self‑reflection" (2 occurrences in conclusion).
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PDF uses "self-assessment" (same as the term used earlier in the body).
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4. "or restlessness" dropped in PDF
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DOCX: "When wandering thoughts or restlessness arise, they find it
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difficult not only to accept these thoughts, but also to
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accept themselves."
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PDF: "When wandering thoughts arise, they find it difficult..."
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→ PDF omits "or restlessness".
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5. ", during meditation," repositioned in PDF
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DOCX: "Some people even get caught in inner knots that have been
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unresolved for decades during meditation, with all kinds of
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emotions entangling them without end, unable to let them go."
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PDF: "Some people, during meditation, even get caught in inner
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knots that have been unresolved for decades, with all kinds
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of emotions entangling them without end, unable to let them go."
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→ PDF moves "during meditation" earlier and wraps it in commas.
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6. Other PDF typesetting errors (not DOCX-vs-PDF but visible in the PDF)
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a) Double space after deleted text (p.85)
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PDF: "When wandering thoughts arise, they find it difficult…"
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Note: After "or restlessness" was dropped (see #4), the extra
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space was not collapsed — "thoughts arise" shows a double
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space visible in the typeset output.
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b) Space before comma (p.87)
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PDF: "…have been unresolved for decades , with all kinds of
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emotions entangling them…"
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Note: There is an extra space between "decades" and the comma
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that should not be there.
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