docs: translation-findings.dj is automatic deliverable in proofread workflow

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### Deliverables
- `bilingual.dj` — extracted from DOCX (interleaved)
- `edit-suggestions.dj` — mechanical/issues found in the manuscript
- `edit-suggestions.dj` — mechanical/manuscript-level issues
- `translation-findings.dj` — translation quality issues (always produced)
### Extraction
@@ -110,22 +111,23 @@ Only flag objective/manuscript-level issues:
- **Capitalization typos** — `Philosopher Nietzsche``philosopher Nietzsche`
- **Stray/unusual characters** in either language
### What NOT to flag
Do NOT flag translation quality issues here — those go to `translation-findings.dj`:
Do NOT flag translation quality issues — the English is authoritative manuscript text:
- Terminology choices (e.g. "delusional dreams" for 颠倒梦想)
- Translation style, calques, fluency preferences
- Terminology choices, translation style, calques, fluency
- Djot formatting conventions (em-dashes, italics)
- Word order, added concepts, degree weakening
These belong to the **translation** workflow, not proofread.
### Translation review (translation-findings.dj)
### Separate translation-quality findings
Always produced. Load `translation-review` skill after extraction, scan for:
If the user explicitly asks for a translation review of a proofread article,
write findings to `translation-findings.dj` (separate from `edit-suggestions.dj`).
Load the `translation-review` skill and follow its Workflow B.
- **Terminology** — key Buddhist terms rendered correctly
- **Content omission** — specific examples/explanations dropped
- **Added concepts** — words not in source (e.g. "creator" for 主宰)
- **Degree shifts** — 一切 → "many", weakening of claims
- **Terminology dilution** — technical terms rendered as literary paraphrase
- **Double renderings** — multiple translations of the same term side by side
- **Word order** — reversed logical sequence (e.g. 内圣外王)
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