Article from jiqun.com id=213. source.dj/target.dj at 179-line parity;
bilingual.dj generated locally (not committed). Terminology verified against
terms DB; decisions and open points in edit-suggestions.dj. Toolkit bump
brings in speaker's-voice (语气) guidance applied in this translation.
- Active voice and 'we' subjects (R1)
- Noun-to-verb conversion and abstract-to-concrete rewrites (R2/R8)
- Simplified vocabulary and removed filler words (R3/R5)
- Split long sentences and improved conversational tone (R4/R6)
- Removed unnecessary -ly adverbs and stiff constructions (R7)
- Specific word fixes: tumor hospitals -> cancer hospitals, stop the loss -> keep pain from getting worse, etc.
- Restored A:/_A:_ formatting so only first answer paragraph carries the marker.
Recurring patterns smoothed across the text include:
- "keen on" -> "eagerly pursuing" / "eager to"
- "great wise teachers" -> "great teachers"
- "wisdom culture" -> "culture of wisdom"
- "more ultimate" -> "more complete" / "more profound"
- "delusive thoughts still fly about" -> "delusions run wild"
- "outdo animals by far" -> "animals are left far behind"
- "arouse resonance" -> "strike a chord"
- "serve as reference" -> "provide guidance"
- "straddling two boats" -> "trying to walk two paths"
- "choice difficulty" -> "decision paralysis"
- "religious community" -> "Buddhist community"
- "tree wishing stillness while the wind keeps blowing" -> "the tree may crave stillness, but the wind will not cease"
- "optimization of life" -> "flourishing of life"
- "right-livelihood occupation" -> "right livelihood"
- "more valuably" -> "more wisely"
See review-comments.dj for the full list of findings and justifications.
split the review skills into self- and other-
the self- variant makes informational comments
the other- variant makes nice comments
Google docs is a failure
- review-comments.dj: use exact, case-matched, unique quoted snippets
(10+ words each) instead of short unsearchable fragments
- translation-review-comment skill: add Mode B workflow for Google Docs
targets — read doc, output review-comments.dj, user inserts manually
- document the Drive API anchor limitation in skill pitfalls
- skills/translation-review-comment/SKILL.md: 14 rules distilled from 473
Wade editor comments across 3 manuscripts
- translate-files/佛法与企业管理/review-comments.dj: manual comment
reference for maple's translation (anchored comments not possible via API)
- docs/google-docs-comment-journey.dj: full journey log from OAuth setup
to discovering Google Drive API's anchor limitation
pptx-translate, chinese-text-normalize, dharma-translation: canonical
location now ./skills/ with symlinks in ~/.hermes/skills/.
translation-review: merged CSV/XLSX review + .dj comparison workflows
into single SKILL.md. Added buddhist-terminology.md and
terms-db-alignment.md references from Hermes version.
- Matched 75 paragraphs from _full.docx English translation
- Manually split 8 paragraphs where 260423 has different breaks
- Translated 24 table/prayer section paragraphs
- Preserved all run-level formatting (bold, sz, color, highlight)
- Kept Buddhist term (恩田) in original characters with English gloss
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